Template:Did you know nominations/Gherardo Gambelli

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 17:17, 11 May 2024 (UTC)

Gherardo Gambelli

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... that Gherardo Gambelli, the incoming Archbishop of Florence, was called "the priest of the peripheries, from Africa to prison" by Avvenire? Source: Avvenire (in Italian)
- ALT1: ... that Gherardo Gambelli, the incoming Archbishop of Florence, served as a prison chaplain in Chad for over a decade? Source: Holy See Press Office; Il Messaggero
- Reviewed: Peter Verhægen

Created by Bloom6132 (talk) and Rutsq (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 258 past nominations.

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Bloom6132 (talk) 21:24, 18 April 2024 (UTC).

I'm listed as one of the creators. I'd suggest rephrasing to highlight the contrast between "archbishop" and "prison chaplain" and remove unessential "missionary": that Gherardo Gambelli, the incoming Archbishop of Florence, served as a prison chaplain in Chad for more than a decade? Rutsq (talk) 17:37, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

@Rutsq: good suggestion. Please feel free to suggest any other ALT hooks. —Bloom6132 (talk) 00:05, 20 April 2024 (UTC)

Review needed. --evrik ^(talk) 17:27, 8 May 2024 (UTC)

New enough; definitely long enough; presentable; no images; and QPQ fulfilled. Original hook is spicy, although I feel awkward just repeating someone else's quote about the subject; ALT1 is bland but also fine. Earwig can't find any copyvios and it rephrases all the cited sources. Two slight citation problems: the archdiocese of Florence press release link has decayed (I fixed this), and the Avvenire source does not support the claim that "his return to Italy in 2023 [was] at the request of his ordinary, Giuseppe Betori, Archbishop of Florence". I suspect a bad translation turned "rendere noto" into "made certain", when it really means "made public". A simple fix is to remove the "at the...Florence" clause, which is not necessary for the rest of the sentence (I did not fix this). Otherwise, the sources seem reliable: the only iffy one is the archdiocese of Florence press release, which may not be indepedent &emdash; but that is not the sole citation for the claim it supports. Bernanke's Crossbow (talk) 23:35, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

@Bernanke's Crossbow: done. Thanks a million for getting the archive URL for that press release! —Bloom6132 (talk) 02:27, 11 May 2024 (UTC)

Then I change my review to . Bernanke's Crossbow (talk) 03:29, 11 May 2024 (UTC)