Talk:Songs of Experience (David Axelrod album)
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:20, 6 March 2014 (UTC)
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- "album Song of Innocence, he composed" -> "album Song of Innocence, Axelrod composed" (because you've mentioned other people between here and the last mention of Axelrod).
- Looks like Blake's work was "Songs of Innocence and of Experience" (i.e. note the second "of").
- "Like on his 1968" would prefer "As he had on his 1968..."
- "gatefold LP" just links to gatefold so no need to include LP in the link. Particularly as you later link LP individually.
- Was it Axelrod who "dubbed the album..."? If so, attribute that quote accordingly.
- "of majesty and "pastoral sadness", respectively" why only half of this in quotes?
- Allmusic -> AllMusic.
- Any information on sales statistics from the original or the reissue?
- Could split refs into two columns.
- Allmusic, gatefold comments above apply in refs too.
- Spaced hyphens in ref titles should be replaced with spaced en-dashes ({{endash}}) per WP:DASH.
A few comments, so I'll put the article on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:03, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
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