Talk:Rudolf Peierls/GA1
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 04:13, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
This article is in good shape. A few comments:
- Tube Alloys is overlinked in the lead, electron hole, electronic band structure, Hans Bethe, Klaus Fuchs and AERE are overlinked in the body
- suggest linking Jewish assimilation
- "he listed to" listened?
- given Umklapp is just the German word for flip-over, should it have an initial cap? Not sure about this one, there are two examples, with Umklapp treated differently
- "with a family Canada"? Not sure what is meant here.
- British supply Mission, drop the M?
- perhaps mention in the lead that he received many awards
- the image licensing looks fine.
Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. No rush. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 04:13, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
- This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:52, 19 December 2017 (UTC)