Talk:Dragonwyck (novel)

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Clarification needed for "the pair".[edit]

I did some light editing. One of the sentences that mentions a pair of characters is unclear, however:

The pair initially dislike each other, and because of his views, Miranda is baffled when Nicholas asks Dr Turner to attend to his wife, who has a cold.

Changed to: "Van Ryn and Turner instantly dislike each other, and because of his views, Miranda is baffled when Nicholas asks the doctor to attend to his wife, who has a cold."

Why: Who the pair are meant to be is unclear. However, since the sentence goes on to discuss Miranda's perplexity at Van Ryn and Turner interacting, I surmised that they were "the pair". Since "initially" implies that they eventually become friends, it was changed to instantly. If I am mistaken who the author meant as "the pair", please re-edit. Thank you, Wordreader (talk) 16:26, 19 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Link added.[edit]

I added a See also section with a link to Manor of Rensselaerswyck, the patroonship on the Hudson River near where Dragonwyck is situated.