Comment from just a quick look, the records in the Log need fixed, as there are no ties. 0-0-0-0 should be just 0-0-0. Grsztalk 23:58, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
comment Honestly, if I was reviewing this, I probably would quick fail it. A lot of good work has gone into it, but it doesn't look done. There is nothing in the pre-season, draft, transactions and minor league affiliates sections, and the lead needs a great deal of expansion to encompass each section. I'd recommend withdrawing the GA nom for now, filling out the prose in these sections, then re-nominating. Resolute 04:21, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
